I was a pupil at Yaldhurst Model School and this blog is where I shared my learning.
Wednesday, August 17, 2016
rugby and netball tourny
Hi guys in term 3 week 2 me and some of my classmates went to a rugby tournament. We lost all are games but i had an awesome time and a got try I was so happy here are some photos from the tournament. if you injoy leave a like
Hi Zack, I've had a look at your blog and some of the the language that you have used is a little inappropriate for a school learning blog. Also I think you need to take some time when you you write your blog posts to make sure you have capital letters, full stops and correct punctuation. Other wise, good blog, keep it up!
Hi Zac, It looks like you all had a great time at the rugby tournament. A suggestion i have is that you might want to take out the netball in the title, or put some photos of the netball tournament.
There was a good variate of photo's and an awesome thing to write about but what I would suggest for next time is tell us who you were vs and how many schools were there. Kind regards Chris
Hi Zack,
ReplyDeleteI've had a look at your blog and some of the the language that you have used is a little inappropriate for a school learning blog. Also I think you need to take some time when you you write your blog posts to make sure you have capital letters, full stops and correct punctuation. Other wise, good blog, keep it up!
Hi Zac,
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you all had a great time at the rugby tournament. A suggestion i have is that you might want to take out the netball in the title, or put some photos of the netball tournament.
Hi Zac
ReplyDeleteThere was a good variate of photo's and an awesome thing to write about but what I would suggest for next time is tell us who you were vs and how many schools were there.
Kind regards Chris