Monday, May 16, 2016

Das Piano

The last two weeks our reading group was reading a story from WWI called 'Das Piano' which means 'The Piano'. It is a German title. We were learning to describe a character from an alternative point of view and understand how people and communities behaved in times of conflict.

Saturday, May 14, 2016

My timetable for term 2

This term in our class we are self managing.  By making are own timetable and working with it if you have any ideas on how to improve mine  leave a comment .

Tuesday, May 10, 2016

100 word challenge

Once every week my class has to write  a story but  not just any story we have to write 100 words it is very fun and we have a  prompt that we have to write about it could be a picture or a word I hope you like it.

One day when I was walking home from school I saw a spooky house. I though don’t go in but I did I got to the door and opened it there was a big cccrc when I opened the door. it was very dark I was lucky I had my phone so I turned on the phones flash life the first thing I saw was stairway. It looked very new but the rest of the house looked like trash The stairway had white carpet and a gold handrail on both sides I walked up and saw a giant unicorn.

Wednesday, May 4, 2016

my true or false story

In the holidays I completed 2 Lego games in 1 day by playing all night long. It was so much fun I was up all night and I was so sleepy the next day. The games were Lego movie and Lego marvel super heroes. I had a pie for a snack half way through the day. Then in the night I had a mint milo and a row  of crackers.  At 1:30 am I finished the last level I was super tired I almost feel asleep before I saved  the game. But I made just in time. then I took a sleep till 9:00 am in the morning. then I did some free play on both games so do you think my story is true or false comment what you think  down below.

Friday, April 15, 2016

top 10 ways to look after your chromebook

for the past term rimu class have been making chromebook movies I learned that we should really look after are chrome book and we are lucky to have them.

Tuesday, March 8, 2016

My wonder essay

Last week our writing was to make a short essay on what explaining what point of view R.J palacio used when he wright ‘wonder’ we. we also had to to find an example from the text’.We also had to find quotes to back up are  theory. It had to have a Introduction  2 ti 3 examples  paragraphs and a conclusion. I find wonder very cool i can not wait to find out what happens   





‘Wonder’ is a story about a boy who feels ordinary on the inside, but he is always reminded of how different he is by how people respond when they see him. This is R.J Palacio’s first novel and it is written


August may be different but he does not acked different


R.J palacio used 1st person to make wonder because in chapter one he said I am like a regular 10 year old boy  I have ride my bike I eat ice cream I play ball and I have an xbox .


In chapter 2 he uses first person again because he used  I and me here is an example.  I was very nervous so I hid behind Mum  and waited and walked with her.

In my conclusion 'wonder' is written in 1st person because he uses I and me.